tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post5357404985457181914..comments2023-05-08T08:16:08.613-07:00Comments on VIATGE PER CYBERLAND CEIP Santa Bárbara (Tous). 3er cicle de primària: Fun in winter ( Hannah )JOANAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02588981299868465899noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-55696041335677091462011-01-04T03:40:14.776-08:002011-01-04T03:40:14.776-08:00M'agradat molt i ara llo bosenbie un altre
...M'agradat molt i ara llo bosenbie un altre <br /><br />per aixo magra el nadal perque magraen els animalsJordihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12864754842617917704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-14584548056534294712010-12-30T12:00:08.488-08:002010-12-30T12:00:08.488-08:00ja aplega nadal
venen els reis
i ens deixen regal...ja aplega nadal <br />venen els reis<br />i ens deixen regalsUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01355644820020496836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-40545983954050906212010-12-30T11:58:19.802-08:002010-12-30T11:58:19.802-08:00L'ultima fulla dels arbres
a caigut ya
i una b...L'ultima fulla dels arbres<br />a caigut ya<br />i una brisca fresca de vent<br />se la enportat.<br /><br />els ocells ja fujen<br />d'aquest ambient tan fresc<br />per trobar-ne un mes calid i estiuenc<br /><br />Amb els primers flaoquets de neu<br />els xiquetsixen al carrer molt abrigadets.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01355644820020496836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-77822559675269391502010-12-28T04:26:40.726-08:002010-12-28T04:26:40.726-08:00Sent el retras ,Hannah m'a agradat molt sobret...Sent el retras ,Hannah m'a agradat molt sobretot per l'ivernUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04360174714148653081noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-10349226106307791482010-12-26T01:19:36.989-08:002010-12-26T01:19:36.989-08:00Hola Esther! M'ha agrada molt la teua poesia. ...Hola Esther! M'ha agrada molt la teua poesia. Bon Nadal a tots! Adeu! B7s!Nuria De Vuysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08018418186661542949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-16460998950400217392010-12-25T10:57:53.850-08:002010-12-25T10:57:53.850-08:00Que xula Esther , la primera estrofa , per que la ...Que xula Esther , la primera estrofa , per que la segona ,no rima molt .Bon Nadalestelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04418847453155615625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-50566484885342257302010-12-25T07:02:17.324-08:002010-12-25T07:02:17.324-08:00hola Hannah!
M´agradaria fer-te un comentari en ...hola Hannah!<br /> <br />M´agradaria fer-te un comentari en angles pero com que no tinc ací a Joana no et puc fer cap pero et prometo que quan anem al colegi et faig un.Aixó si et puc fer una poesia.Si no saps que es el caganer ja t´ ho diré quan ens vegem bueno que m´estic enrrollant mes val que t´escriga la poesia:<br /><br />Els bombons<br />que bons<br />per nadal<br />et donc un regal<br />que passa amb el mes de Gener?<br />donc que te el seu propi caganer.<br /><br /><br />seran torrons,<br />potser regals,<br />el que omplin els cors.<br /><br /><br />Ja se que l´ultima estrofa no rima pero no estava molt inspirada.<br />Adeu bon nadal a tots.nunca dejes de pensarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08979151442963698519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-13627404196266404772010-12-24T02:43:13.971-08:002010-12-24T02:43:13.971-08:00Bon Nadal!Bon Nadal!Isabel Barrielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10889123961995703724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-57297366508659851292010-12-24T01:25:56.335-08:002010-12-24T01:25:56.335-08:00Hello Hannah!
Your poem is very beautiful, I like ...Hello Hannah!<br />Your poem is very beautiful, I like it.<br />I made a Haikú for you:<br /><br /><br />The Christmas is here,<br />with the winter in your poem!<br />But, where is the snow?<br /><br />Here a poem:<br /><br /> THE SNOW<br /><br /> I'd like to see the snow,<br /> I really want to go!<br /> I make a snowman,<br /> as big as I can. <br /><br />I hope you like it. Bye, bye!Nuria De Vuysthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08018418186661542949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-77645911678202899622010-12-23T03:57:01.088-08:002010-12-23T03:57:01.088-08:00Hola, a tots!! Hannah, m'agrada molt el teu po...Hola, a tots!! Hannah, m'agrada molt el teu poema, jo també n'he fet un en valencià de l'hivern i el Nadal. Continua així, què ho fas molt bé. B7s!! :DNeushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07904940975199675112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-61714485113748064802010-12-21T14:38:11.195-08:002010-12-21T14:38:11.195-08:00M'agrada més com tu las fet , si vols disen is...M'agrada més com tu las fet , si vols disen ise .estelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04418847453155615625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-62612523053562754052010-12-21T14:26:28.641-08:002010-12-21T14:26:28.641-08:00Què tal així Estela?
Arriba l'hivern
comença...Què tal així Estela?<br /><br />Arriba l'hivern <br />comença a nevar,<br />fa un fred infernal<br />i l'arbre despullat<br />es vist tot de blanc.<br />Seiem a la llar,<br />celebrem el Nadal<br />i tots a menjar.<br /><br />The agafat la idea i he afegit uns pocs versos més. Ja em diràs que et sembla. La idea és teua, eh. Jo sols l'he refet!!!JOANAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02588981299868465899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-74202935535785018912010-12-21T10:58:35.722-08:002010-12-21T10:58:35.722-08:00Felicitats Hannah , encara que no entenc molt el p...Felicitats Hannah , encara que no entenc molt el poema se que trata del hivern asi vos dise el meu poema del hivern espere que vos agrade:<br /> Cauen les fulles dels arbres<br /> comenÇa a nevar.<br /> Anem tots contents <br /> a menjar.estelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04418847453155615625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-57557960996857642322010-12-21T08:47:05.404-08:002010-12-21T08:47:05.404-08:00Thank you for the comments.I look forward to readi...Thank you for the comments.I look forward to reading other poems too.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01849818872827025245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-58397325348887370242010-12-21T05:02:12.092-08:002010-12-21T05:02:12.092-08:00que xulo hannah!!que xulo hannah!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-24271119332389659012010-12-21T05:02:11.266-08:002010-12-21T05:02:11.266-08:00que xulo hannah!!que xulo hannah!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4649162572247013455.post-49513636879920770612010-12-21T03:25:05.439-08:002010-12-21T03:25:05.439-08:00That's fantastic, Hannah!!!
I like it very muc...That's fantastic, Hannah!!!<br />I like it very much. With this poem we celebrate a new season: Today is the 21st of december. Winter has just come and christmas is very near.<br /><br />Thank you very much for your interest and creativity!!!<br /><br />I hope your classmates write more poems like this, but I think they have to use valencian language.JOANAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02588981299868465899noreply@blogger.com